Feedback from Vanessa: (Copied and pasted from the comments section of blogger)
The Hills:
The analysis is very good of the videos story line and characters etc.
But you need to comment on the camera and editing for more marks.
Avicii: Wake Me Up:
Analysis of lyrics is good, comment more on camera and editing (Choice of shots, close ups etc)
Also you need to do one more case study.
Chosen: Lean and Bop (J Hus ft Doccy Docs)
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ReplyDeleteWhere are the improvements to Avici? You should have responded to the comments relating the the actual posts. Also where is the J Hus additional case study??? Vanessa
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